浙江高考复习研讨会高考英语书面表达专题讲座.ppt

高考英语 “书面表达” 专题讲座 周建林（Zhou_jianlin@126.com） 2014年3月9日 杭州 “书面表达” 中存在的误区！ 追求 “高级词汇” 滥用 “高级语法” 背诵 “美文佳句” 套用 “写作模版” 好用谚语、名言 讲座提要 对 “书面表达” 的认识 “一段式短文” 的写法 “书面表达” 的命题 “书面表达” 的评分 “书面表达” 训练的误区 对 “书面表达” 训练的建议 高考英语“书面表达”的概念 “（要求考生）根据提示，用英语写一篇100~120个词的短文。提示的形式有图画、图表、文字等” （《考试说明》） “能写出常见体裁的应用文，例如：信函和一般通知等”，“能描述人物或事件，并进行简单的评论” （《课程标准》七级语言技能目标） “能根据用文字及图表提供的信息写短文或报告”，“能写出语意连贯且结构完整的短文，叙述事情或表达观点和态度”（ 《课程标准》八级语言技能目标） 高考英语“书面表达”的定义 字数在100~120个词左右的 语意连贯的 结构完整的 有描述、叙述和评论的 英语短文 内容、意思 形式 写作手法（即材料的组织方法） 短文（essay）的定义 New Oxford English Dictionary: a short piece of writing on a particular subject（主题）. Merriam-Websters Advanced Learners English Dictionary: a short piece of writing that tells a persons thoughts or opinions about a subject Essay的定义 An essay is a relatively short piece of writing that may serve one or more purposes: to inform, persuade, entertain, explain, or merely express an idea, feeling, or impression. (The College Writer, Carol C. Kanar) 段落（paragraph）的定义 Oxford Advanced Learner’s Dictionary (8th edition): a section of a piece of writing, usually consisting of several sentences dealing with a single subject. The first sentence of a paragraph starts on a new line Merriam-Websters Advanced Learners English Dictionary: a part of a piece of writing that usually deals with one subject, that begins on a new line, and that is made up of one or more sentences Paragraph的定义 A paragraph is a short paper of around 150 – 200 words. It usually consists of an opening point called a topic sentence followed by a series of sentences which support that point. (College Writing Skills with Readings, John Langan) A text in which one thought or idea is developed by means of supporting details, is known as a paragraph. (Strengthen Your Writing, 3rd ed. V. R. arayanaswami) Parts of the traditional essay Introductory paragraph Introduction First supporting paragraph Second supporting paragraph Third supporting paragraph Concluding paragraph Conclusion Diagram