四级作文：常见错误.ppt

片断句 不间断句 误用逗号连接句 垂悬修饰语 误用平行句法 非必要性角度转换 Split infinitive 不一致、词性误用 There be 句型错误 Be动词与动词连用错误 The sentence fragment片断句 一个合乎语法的完整句子必须具有主语和谓语这两种基本成分。从结构上来说，它应该是可以独立运用的语言单位。片断句是指像短语、从句、同位语以及其他诸如此类不能够独立使用的语言单位。写作时若错误地使用标点符号，将这类不能独立使用的语法结构当成句子分列出来，那便叫做片断句。 Common Mistakes 句子沒有主语。 Entertained 1000 people with an outdoor concert every July. She entertained 1000 people with an outdoor concert every July. 句子沒有动词。 The bill that they have discussed for a long time The bill that they have discussed for a long time was passed this afternoon. All of the officials with jobs there. All of the officials with jobs there were worried about it. The run—on sentence不间断句 该断句的地方没有正确地使用标点符号断句，而将两个或两个以上（结构上各自独立完整而又互不从属的）句子融合在一起成为一个不合语法、结构松散的句子称不间断句。 如果两个完整的句子中间只用逗号隔开而被错误地并成一个句子，这种句子便叫误用逗号连接句。 不间断句 Getting married is easy staying married is a different matter. Getting married is easy. Staying married is a different matter. Getting married is easy, but staying married is a different matter. Although getting married is easy, staying married is a different matter. Ask the first person you see if they will help you I am sure they will. Ask the first person you see if they will help you; I am sure they will. Ask the first person you see if they will help you, and I am sure they will. 注： 两种较难形式 Jack has won the Booker Prize with his first novel he is an Indian author living in Great Britain. Jack, (who is) an Indian author living in Great Britain, has won the Booker Prize with his first novel. Winning the Booker Prize with his first novel, Jack is an Indian author living in Great Britain. 误用逗号连接句 (A) 改用句号分成两个句子。 I completed my essay, I have not submitted(交) it.I completed my essay. I have not submitted it. (B) 改用分号分成两个句子。 It rained heavily in the afternoon, we managed to have our picnic anyway.It rained heavily in the afternoon; we managed to have our picnic anyway. (C) 使用适当的连接词 I like you, you are kind to