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雅思培训丨雅思大作文开头难不难朗阁海外考试研究中心俗话说：A good beginning is half done.的确如此，一个好的开端为后面的成功奠定了坚实的基础，正所谓万事开头难也就是这个道理，在雅思写作中也是如此。那么我们如何在有限的时间内，又快又好的写出一个让阅卷人眼前一亮的开头段呢？相信很多备战的烤鸭都想知道。让你的开头段清新自然、让你的开头段行云流水、让你的开头段大大的吸引考官的眼球是每一个朗阁雅思写作专家追求的梦想。好多同学拿到大作文的考题，思来想去却无从下笔，有的甚至只会copy the rubric, 把题目原封不动的抄写下来。殊不知，这样考官就会牢牢地抓住你的小辫子，在统计字数时，你所抄写的那一部分就不会被统计在内了。朗阁雅思专家建议各位考生要了解开头段写作的小技巧小秘密，首先就要学会如何充分利用原题改写信息。Here is an example:At present it is hard for college graduates to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. What do you think?通过题目分析，我们可以看出题目本身给出了背景信息，也给出了一些人的观点，那么，好！我们就可以顺坡下驴，很巧妙的对题目进行一个转述，轻松的写出一个自然流畅的开头段。那么怎么做呢？首先，我们要找到题目当中哪些词是可以为我们所用，可以被替换掉的？聪明的你一定看到了：at present可以被替换成these days、today、at the present time、currently、in the contemporary society / world等等；hard可以用difficult两种常用句式find it difficult to do、have difficulties in doing sth.来实现替换；而collegestudents可以用一个时间状语从句College students…when they graduate来变换，不仅简洁，而且用到了复合句。所以第一句话可以轻松的改写成：These days, college students have great difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate.You see, it’s very simple.接着再往下看，many是修饰可数名词复数，那么我们可以大展拳脚了，numerous、countless、a great/large/vast number of、a great many等等都可以派上用场；动词claim也比较好找到同义词argue、contend、insist、maintain、assert、proclaim、state、advocate、hold the view that都可以，大家只要记住两三个就可以了；最难的是give priority to，这个词是优先考虑的意思，我们可以用pay more / increasing attention to、lay more stress/ emphasis on、attach great importance to等实现替换；那么接下来我们就让这道题目实现一个华丽的转身：These days there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate. （事实引入）A large number of people hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge contributes to this situation. In light of this, they contend that college teachers should lay more stress on practical courses than on traditional ones.（点题） For my part, I am in favor of their viewpoint（个人观点）.是不是看起来非常的流畅自然呢？开头段一定要keep it slim, 保持苗条、拒绝臃肿，这样更能突出你主体段论证的深