TEM8200汉译英试卷评析下.pptVIP

英语专业八级考试在线课堂 2．2 汉英平行结构单位要求对比与翻译 英语平行结构各单位之间的语法要求一致，而汉语平行结构各单位字数要求相等。 汉语的“语句组织中自然包含了声律的要求。结构严谨、音韵和谐的句子组织，既是语法问题，又是修辞问题。” （郭绍虞，1979）爱用骈偶是汉语的一个特色。现代的对仗有的不很严格，有时只求字数的相等。使用Parallelism是英语的一大特点。英语中Parallelism形式种类繁多，规模大小不等，虽不求字数的相等，却严格要求组成部分的语法成分一致，或者说，受制于语法或文体修辞规则，该平行的必须平行，不然便视为缺点或错误（faulty）。（J. E. Kahn，1985:421) 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 句[1]中骈偶结构有：情趣相投、脾气对味；则合、则交；则离、则绝。译文平行结构各单位之间的语法要求一致,试比较： （1）If people have similar interesting and temper, they will make friends with each other. Otherwise they will separate and putting an end to the friendship. (语法错误) cf. If people have similar interest and temper, they will make friends with each other. Otherwise they will separate and put an end to the friendship. (语法正确) （2）If people have common interest and are similar in temper, they will make friends with each other. Otherwise they separate and will be estranged from each other. (文体问题) cf. If people have common interest and similar temper, they will make friends with each other. Otherwise they will separate and be estranged from each other. (文体恰当) 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 句[2]中骈偶结构有：再熟悉、再亲密；随便过头、不恭不敬。试比较： （1）No matter how familiar or intimacy the friends are, they should not treat each other casually and disrespecting each other. (语法错误) cf. No matter how familiar or intimate the friends are, they should not be too casual and disrespectful to each other. (语法正确) （2）Even if the friends are very familiar or on intimate terms with each other, they should not be too casual and show no respect to each other. (文体问题) cf. Even if the friends are very familiar or intimate, they should not be too casual and disrespectful to each other. (文体恰当) 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 句[3]中骈偶结构有：默契和平衡。试比较： Otherwise, the mutual understand and balance will be broken. (语法错误) cf. Otherwise, the mutual understanding and balance will be broken. (语法正确) 英语专业八级考试在线课堂 句[4]中骈偶结构有：引起冲突，造成隔阂。试比较： （1）… which will bring about conflicts and estrange. (语法错误) cf. … which will bring about conflicts and estrangement. (语法正确) （2）… which will