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表达六法为写作添彩贵州高明琴有些文章虽通篇几乎没有什么语法错误，句子也非常通顺，但读起来却给人一种枯燥无味的感觉。文章枯燥乏味的原因在于语言不够生动、形象，过于平淡、单调。解决这一问题的方法有：语序的调整一般的句子都是主语位于句首。如果这些句子的主语相同且结构又相似的话，就会给人一种啰嗦、累赘、单调乏味的感觉。例如：I get up at six every day.I have breakfast at 7.I go to school at 7:45.I get to school at 8:15.I have lunch at school.School is over at 5 in the aftemnoon.I get home at5:30.I do my homework in the evening.若我们适当地把一些句子的语序做些调整的话，读起来就会是另一番感觉。试看：I get up at six every day,I have breakfast at 7.I have breakfast.After breakfast,I go ft school.I go to school at 8:15.Usually I have lunch at school.School is over at 5 in the aftemoon.I get home at 5:30.In the evening I do my homework.写作时，如果我们适当地将一些句子的状语、宾语置于句首，就可以避免这样的单调性，使语言更为生动，且起到对这些句子成分强调之功效。例如：Slowy he said,”Can’t you do it yourself?”Here in China we won won’t allow any form of workers’ bding looked upon.Therse letters I’d like to send by ording mail,and those two letters by EMS（邮政特快）. Whether she likes it or not,I don’t care.当宾语指代的是前一句的内容或其中的人或物时，这样做可使两句衔接得更紧密，过渡更自然。例如：Whether they will come to our help or not I don’t know.Whether it will rain or not I don’t know.But all these we will discuss fully at tomorrow’s meeting.有时，为了强调，也可将某一句子成分后移。例如：He showed his frend his stamps.→He showed his stamps to his friend.Do you find living here very dull?→Do you find it very dull living here?Whether they succeed or fail doesn’t interest me.→It doesn’t interest me wheher they or not.使用强调手段写作时，适当使用一定的强调手段，不但可起到强调之功效，而且也可使语言更为生动。强调的手段有：词语手段。You are the very person I’m looking for.They did come to our help.句型手段。It is Lucy who will be sent to the conference.It was because he was ill that he didn’t come to school.使用感叹句。I had an interesting trip this summer.→What an interesting trip I had this summer!The result of the experiment was very disappointing.→How disappointing the result of the experiment is!使用倒装使用倒装有时可使句子的描述更为生动。例如：The door opened and in came a woman with a baby in her arms.Up went the arrow into the sky!使用倒装有时可起到强调作用。例如：Only in this way can we leam English well.(试比较：We c