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练习： Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic people below poverty line. You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)下图所示为1978，1985，1997年中国贫困线一下人口的变化情况，请描述其变化； 2)请说明发生这些变化的原因（可从改革开放在我国城乡实施以及高科技在国民经济发展中的利用等方面加以说明）； 3)你认为解决目前中国贫困人口还有什么困难或问题。 解析 1．文章结构 开头： 开篇句：As the bar chart shows, ———— during the years of __ to. 扩展句：1)As early as __,__. 2)Then __ years later,----. 3)And arriving in the year__-,___t. 主体: 主题句：Several factors contribute to__ 扩展句： 1)___ 2)And___ 3)Furthermore 4)all these result in 结尾： 结尾句: However,___ is faced with some problem 扩展句: 1) With ___the effect of which is not only discouraging, but also challenging. 2)So my principle is to pay due attention to the __, but not just __ 2．?填充结构 开头： 开篇句：As the bar chart shows,---- the number of people below the poverty line decreased dramatically during the years of--- 1978 to ---1997. 扩展句：1)As early as--- 1978,--- about 250 million people were under the poverty line. 2) Then--- seven years later,--- the number became three fifths that of 1978. 3)And arriving in the year ---1997,---the number was reduced to 50million. 主体: 主题句：Several factors contribute to ----the sharp decrease of the below-poverty population. 扩展句： 1)—The reform and opening following 1978 enabled the peasants to become much better off 　　 2)And— with the development of Chinese economy that policy also improved city dwellers’ lives greatly. 　　 3)Furthermore,—— the high-tech introduced made it possible for the country’s economy as a whole to take off 　　4)all these result in the great fall of the Chinese population below the poverty line. 2．?填充结构 结尾： 结尾句: However, a further decrease in the number of poverty-stri