2000年高考英语书面表达优秀文章节点评1章节.pptVIP

2000年高考英语书面表达优秀文章点评 二、 内容要点：　　1． 时间：2000年2月8日早晨7点15分；　　2． 地点：公园路公园门前；　　3． 我正沿公园路向东走；　　4． 一辆汽车从第3街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人；　　5． 汽车未停，沿公园路向西开走；　　6． 汽车是黄色的，车牌号是AC864，司机是一位女性。 各档次的给分范围和要求：满分 25分第五档：（21—25分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；句型有变化，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档：（16—20分）能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；但行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档：（11—15分）能写明基本要点；语言虽有较多错误，尚能达意。第二档：（6—10分）能写出部分要点；语言错误多，影响意思表达。第一档：（1—5分）只能写出与所要求内容有关的一些单词或一、两个要点；语言错误很多，只有个别句子可懂。四、 说明：　　1． 内容要点可用不同方式表达。　　2． 对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。 范文： It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to the nearest hospital. Li Hua （以2000年高考题为例） 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你 目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时 所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。 Picture 1: an old man walked out of the park. Picture 2: a car turned right and ran towards him. Picture 3: the car knocked down the old man. Picture 4: the driver drove away. What is each picture about? Please write it down using one simple sentence. It was 7:15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the City Park on the other side of the street. I saw a yellow car drive up third Street and make a right turn into Park Road. The car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didn’t stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. Right at that moment, To my surprise/What’s worse, Before we realized it, It was on the morning