EricaNotes_作文.doc

30分: 160~200字，提纲+情景+图画/图表 100字应用文：信函，简历，摘要 要求: 文章结构: 根据提纲,分成三段,严格规范的议论文.(现状描述—原因分析—提出建议) 每段不要涉及其他段任务. 第一段,3~4句; 第二句三个原因7~8句; 第三段5~6句. 每段如果要总述,下面一定要严密分述. 内容设计: 成功,诚信,团结,和平,(无辜平民的死亡/国家经济损失/国家仇恨),环境,房(政府发展房地产/人们收入增多需要更好的住房条件/房地产商投资),车(好处:便利;坏处:堵塞,安全,污染),就业,教育,网络 思维训练法: 例证思维突破法: 例如Web Addiction 网吧现象,网络的危害等等 3项原因思维训练法: 尽量找到3个因素factors. (不好的现象: 人自身委屈,社会管理,人自身问题) 利弊,不同态度,原因后果,解决措施,发展趋势 内容无所谓,不用创新,只要跟主题相关即可. 语言和行文结构最重要. 提高水平方法: 模仿范文 背诵 语言衔接流畅问题,内容要衔接顺,多写路标词.句与句间要有衔接词,段与段要有过渡表达,观点和观点要有顺序衔接表达. 起承转合:观点-承接-转折-概括 起:开篇点题 Nowadays, a heated debate is springing up as to… When it comes to… As is shown in the picture/table above… With the development of… It is generally believed that… 承:分层列举观点,并列,递进或承接 首先: firstly/ above all/ to begin with/ first and foremost/ in the first place/ on the one hand/ for one thing 其次: secondly/ besides/ in addition/ furthermore/ moreover/ what’s more/ In the second place/ on the other hand/ for another 第三: last the last but not the least/ even worse(不好的方面)/ more importantly(全是好方面) 不分一二三,用过渡: in the meantime/ meanwhile/ as a matter of fact/ in fact/ actually/ obviously/ undoubtedly/ no doubt/ in particular/ to be specific/ similarly/ luckily/ in other words/ the same is also true for/ for example/ for instance… 转: 语意转折 However/ otherwise/ nevertheless/ conversely/ but on the other hand/ on the contrary/ unfortunately/ unlike/ whereas/ yet/ by contrast/ instead/ the reverse is also true 合: 归纳总结, 提出结论 因此: accordingly/ consequently/ as a consequence/ as a result/ therefore/ thus/ hence 总之: by and large/ in general/ on the whole/ generally speaking 总结: in short/ in brief/ in a word/ in conclusion/ to sum up/ with the advantages and disadvantages weighted/ given all above factors/ on the basis of the analysis above, we can draw a conclusion that…/as far as I am concerned… 第一段: 黄金段: The picture depicts a little bird lamenting/shedding tears for(哀痛) the loss of its habitat/paradise. 大幅度减少语法错误: 主谓一致 时态(议论采用现在时) 名词单复数many experiments 介词搭配 we should learn f