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无老师满分范例：Another reason is that modern people are more effective than those in the past. And great efficiency is one fundamental way to success. We are able to make use of many tools increasing productivity today. For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency. As I want to search material concerning the “nuclear energy”, all I have to do is to type this term on Google and a great number of sources will pop out on the screen. Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the information on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers. The distance is conspicuous, thus modern people with advanced technolog y would succeed more readily. 无老师优秀翻译：另外一个原因是现代的人比之前的人效率会更高。更好的效率是成功 的一个关键因素。我们今天可以更好地使用工具来提高我们的效率。比如，电脑就在增加 我们效率这方面上起到了很重要的作用。当我想搜寻关于核能源的材料的时候，我所需要 做的所有的事情就是将这个词输入google，然后接下来很多的资料就会呈现在我的屏幕上。 如果是在过去，我就不得不去图书馆，把自己埋在资料堆里好几天来寻找关于核能源的信 息，如果没有电脑帮助的话。这里的差距很明显，因此拥有高科技的当代人将会更容易成 功。 无老师平庸范例：Another reason is that the modern people have more efficiency than the past people. The better efficiency is important to success. Today, we may use the computer to improve our efficiency. For example, the computer is very important to our success. When I want to find the “nuclear energy” material, all I need to do is imputing the word in the google, and then the information will show from the screen. If we lived in the past, we have to go to the library to find the information about the “nuclear energy”, because we have the computer. The difference is very obvious, so the modern people who have high technology would easier to be successful. 无老师精析：本篇作文的第一段和第二段水平欠佳，因此被无老师忽略，直接从第三段 开始为大家展示。 首先第一句：优秀范例很赞！Another reason is that modern people are more effective than those in the past.对比平庸范例Another reason is that the modern people have more efficiency than the past people.显然这里的差别只在最后一点，也就是优秀范例写的是in the past，平庸范例写的是the past people 。这里的差别主要在于past 当做形容词来用的 时候表示的