英文写作秘诀009减少赘述-Uni-Edit.PDFVIP

英文寫作秘訣英文寫作秘訣 009009：：减减少少赘赘述 述 英文寫作秘訣英文寫作秘訣 000099 ：：减减少少赘赘述述 难难度：度：中中级级 难难度：度：中中级级 快速问答：下面这个句子有 21个字。你可以去掉 4个字，同时保持句意不变吗？ There are several reports that suggest a slight r duction in sugar intake could possibly extend one’s lifespan by about 1-3 years. (“有几个报告显示略微减少糖的摄入量可能会延长人的寿命 1-3年。 ”) 是的，这句话很啰嗦，我们可以减少字数。 句子啰嗦，是用了太多的词来表达观点。在各种形式的英语写作中，言简意赅是良好的写作风格。此 外，简明扼要很容易满足期刊对字数的要求，尤其在摘要中，字数通常是有限的。 让我们来看一下三种减少赘述的方式。 改写：改写： ““There is/are [noun] that [verb]…”” ““There is/are [noun] that [verb]…”” 改写：改写： ““There is/are [noun] that [verb]…””““There is/are [noun] that [verb]…”” 啰嗦 ：There are several studies that suggestThere are several studies that suggest a positive association betw n more moderate There are several studies that suggestThere are several studies that suggest exercise in childhood and bone density. （有几项研究表明儿童适度的运动和骨密度呈正相关。） 简明：Several studies suggestSeveral studies suggest a positive association betw n more moderate exerc ise in Several studies suggestSeveral studies suggest childhood and bone density. 说明：这两组短语意思完全相同，但简洁版本少使用了三个字！ 删删除意思上的除意思上的赘赘述 述 删删除意思上的除意思上的赘赘述述 啰嗦 ：This effect could possibly becould possibly be explained by alternations in biomechanical forces present could possibly becould possibly be in the device. （此效果可能是因为在设 中存在生物机械力的交替。） 简明：This effect could becould be explained by alternations in biomechanical forces present in the could becould be device. 说明： “could ”和“possibly”意思重复，所以删除 “possibly”。 啰嗦 ：The nanotubes had an inner diameter of about 60-about 60-70 nm70 nm.(纳米管具有约 60-70 纳米的内 about 60about 60--70 nm70 nm 径。) 简明：The nanotubes had an inner diameter of 60-60-70 nm70 nm.