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高分作文标志： 1建议长短句交叉；简单句复合句交替使用； 2建议适当使用插入语；比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。 如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。　比如说： Other individuals, however, take the attitude that … 3用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词； 4关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；体现同义词的替换能力。(考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think,people, opinion 等等)? 比如：applicable替换proper, approaches替换ways, implement替换carry out, sharpen one’s competitive edge替换enhance one’s competitiveness(提高某物竞争力), Wide替换wide-ranging或extensive, profound 替换 deep-going等等。 5句型使用是否准确、地道；语法结构多样化（定语从句，主语从句，强调句，倒装句，虚拟语气，非谓语动词等） 6 合理使用连接词和衔接词，是文章结构更加紧凑； 7 开头段开门见山，点明主题，避免太多的无关内容，体现出语言的间接性；比如现象解释性的文章，首段建议采用“引出现象（对提纲所给的汉语意思进行改写和内容的扩充）+现象有可能产生或者带来的问题”的方式，用2-3句就可以完成； 8 主体段的观点避免重复；（建议在写作之前，对主体段谈的原因或解决方法等进行简单构思，提前构思出汉语表达） 9 句子中多用should, would, may, might, possibly等表示可能性的词，使句子语气的表达更加委婉； 10?适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实, 句子开头不要总是用we / I (比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. ) 举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. By doing so，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively 下面拿一篇优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看作者是如何运用各类写作技巧的。 Computer and I ???? I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. ? 　? exceedingly 替换 very ??? thrilling 替换 exciting ??? sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb. be interested in sth. ??? google 替换 search ??? an army of 替换 a lot of 　　The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we hav