课件-人教新课标06浙江高考英语阅卷反思英语作文教学.ppt

黄会健---评卷学科组组长 关联词的使用要与内容衔接。 在写作中不要唐突地出现试卷前文中的短语与句子。 连贯词的应用要注意说话人说话的方向、态度，不能或左或右。 语言表达比内容更为重要。 阅卷教师喜欢什么样的作文? 字体工整,卷面干净； 紧扣主题,条理清晰； 语言地道,过渡自然； 长度适中.一气呵成． 阅卷教师讨厌什么样的作文? 涂涂抹抹，斑斑点点； 层次不清，段落不分； 语句不通，杂乱无章； 书写潦草，卷面不洁； 有少许语言错误; 有背的嫌疑;得27分 教学反思： 教师要充分意识到作文教学的重要性 作文训练应该注意循序渐进 一：熟悉简单句的六大基本句型 二：弄清句子成份，强化句子成份分析 三：辨析句子的种类，明确句子的结构层次 基 本 句 型 1．主语 + 系动词 + 表语： A foreign language is a weapon in the struggle of life. The plan sounds perfect. This material feels soft. This is where I work. 2．主语 + 谓语： The telephone rang. His brother might have gone. We all breathe, drink and eat. 注：这种结构中的谓语动词是不及物动词，状语并非结构上不可缺少的成分。但在某种情况下，不加状语便不能表达完整的意思，这就引出了下列句型： △??? 主语 + 谓语 + 状语： The meeting lasted for two hours. We walked for five miles. This box weighs five kilos. He lives in Guangzhou. They will be flying to London. 3．主语 + 谓语 + 宾语： She is reading a novel. You may have seen each other. He is doing morning exercises. This factory makes machine tools. Mary has ordered a new dress. I have had my lunch. 注：这种结构中的谓语动词是及物动词，后面只跟一个宾语，因此称单宾及物动词，一般不需状语即可表达完整的意思。但在某些情况下，状语必不可少，这就引出了下列句型： △??? 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 + 状语： He put the vase on the table. Jim brought his suitcases upstairs. I’ll take Mary to the station. They treated him kindly. * * 解读’06英语高考阅卷 反思中学英语作文教学 ’06高考英语第II卷成绩分析 单词拼写------ Terrible 66. Letting the water run while you brush your teeth w water. 67. Alexander Graham Bell i______ the telephone. 68. She has written many articles for a popular women’s m______. 69. Eric came running into the room, out of b_______. 70. The curtains are made from a very expensive m_______. astes nvented agzine reath aterial 71. The only piece of f_______ he has in his room is a bed. 72. Bread is e______ in this shop; it costs twice as much across the street. 73. Everyone thought he was j______, but in fact he was completely serious. 74. Boys and girls are e______, and thus they should be treated fairly. 75. The w______ in the hills can change