雅思强化写作小作文三.ppt

流程图与地图写作分析 图表写作 三 巧克力制作流程图 难度等级：两星（较容易） 特点：史上图片最多的流程图 分段分组描述，不能每张图片写一段 除了文字信息之外的细节描写： 果实颜色变化：几个颜色，几次变化？ 温度数字 WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words. 巧克力制作流程图 The diagrams explain the different stages in the process of making chocolate. 【所有的小作文第一句话都要用一般现在时。流程图必备三个词：process：整个过程, stage：阶段，step：步骤】 Chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is growing in parts of South America, Africa and Indonesia. The tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans. 丝绸的制作过程 难度等级：两星半—三星 剑六：test 2 注意：此难度范围的流程图数量较多。 考官例文评析 考官范文 图一 The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm. （分段开场）First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself. After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again. 考官范文 图二 The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth. （总括句）Once selected, they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage. Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage. 考官范文 结论 Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process. 高分范文 另一则paraphrasing and regrouping As is displayed in the first diagram, the life cycle of the silkworm can be categorized into 4 main stages.（开场句） First, the life of the silkworm starts from eggs propagated by the moth, and it takes 10 days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves. Silkworm larva continues to grow in 4 to 6 weeks