[幼儿读物]高级写作.pptVIP

I got up a little later than usual on Sunday morning. After washing and having a quick breakfast, I started going to town to buy the dictionary recommended by the teacher. At the school gate I saw Li Ping and asked him if he was going to town as well. We decided to go together when he said he was. As all the buses were crowded, We had to wait for a long time at the bus stop before we could get on one. An hour later we got off the bus at a busy street, where three bookstores were available. We went to the first one and didnt find the dictionary. Then at the second one, the shop assistant said that the dictionary was sold out. I finally got the dictionary at the third bookstore. After that Li Ping and I went to other stores and bought various things. We returned to school just in time for lunch. 1. What is a paragraph? A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single ,complete topic. read Paragraph A and Paragraph B ,then tell me which is?better, A or B ? ??? I have an old bicycle which my father gave me for my 12th birthday. I received a lot of presents that day, but the bicycle was my favorite one. We had cake and ice cream at the party. Then we rode our bicycles to the park. Jim had an accident on his bicycle and had to see a doctor. Then it started to rain. I rode my bicycle back home and did my homework. After dinner I took my bicycle out again and rode around the neighborhood. All my friends wanted to try my new bike. It was my favorite present that day. What a busy birthday I had! 2) What makes a good paragraph? To be as effective as possible, a paragraph should contain each of the following traits or elements: unity, coherence, a topic sentence, adequate development, a brief conclusion (dispensable). 2.1 Unity of a paragraph If all the sentences in the paragraph lead to one central theme, the paragraph is unified. Example I had a wonderful summer. First, I started sleeping every day. Then I would go swimming