[英语学习]CET4英语写作.ppt

CET4 - Writing 作文三原则： 总分总 1、2、3 简单句 2011.06 Title: Online Shopping (120 words) Outline: 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚。 网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题。 我的建议。 总：现在网上购物已成为一种时尚（现象） 总：淘宝业绩一直在增长； 很多人喜欢网购衣服、书籍甚至电子产品； 网上购物已成为一种时尚。 分：网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 分： 网上购物有很多好处 1. 省脚力省时间 2. 种类繁多 3. 对比价格 但也有不少问题 1. 银行卡信息及个人信息容易泄露 2. 容易买到假货 总：我的建议 总： 我认为网上购物已成为一种时尚，我们应该明智地利用 小额物品可以上网购买； 但大额物品最好去实体店购买 总：淘宝业绩一直在增长； 很多人喜欢网购衣服、书籍甚至电子产品； 网上购物已成为一种时尚。 During the last few years, the sales of T, one of the famous e-commerce websites in China, have increased rapidly. Many people have been buying clothes, books and even electronic products over the Internet. Shopping online has become a new trend. 分： 网上购物有很多好处 1. 省脚力省时间 2. 种类繁多 3. 对比价格 There are many advantages to shopping online. First, it saves the feet and time. Second, simply by clicking into an e-commerce website, you can find various categories of goods available for you to choose from. Third, you can compare the prices given by different stores and make the best buying decision. 但也有不少问题 1. 信用卡信息及个人隐私容易泄露 2. 容易买到假货 But there are also some disadvantages to online shopping. For example, your credit card information or personal privacy may be disclosed. In addition, it is hard to examine the quality of products and you may even buy some fake products. 总： 我认为网上购物已成时尚，我们应该明智地利用 小额物品可以上网购买； 大额物品最好去实体店购买 In my opinion, online shopping has become a new trend and we should make clever use of it. Goods that cost only a small amount of money can be conveniently purchased over the net. However, expensive products should be purchased from a physical shop as it is too risky buying them over the net. 2010.12 Title: How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? (120 words) Outline: 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该… How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent? 1. 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切 总： 目前不少父母为孩子包办一切， 接送孩子上学放学，帮孩子找工作，… 这样会造成孩子缺乏独立生活的能力，在成长中遇到困难。 2. 为了让孩子独立，父母应该… 分：为了让孩子独立，父母可以考虑以下几点 1. 对于孩子生活中的小问题，鼓励孩子自己解决 2. 对于孩子生活中的大问题，应该先听取一下孩子自己的意见，再共同商量解决 3. 鼓励孩子多与同学交流，让他们意识到