初一年级下期末作文讲评.ppt

写作文的步骤： 拟题 联想材料 拟提纲 打初稿 修改 6 誊写至考卷 半命题作文 1. 确定主题，填充标题 My favorite _______________ 2. 选材料 3. 拟提纲 4. 打初稿 5. 修改 6. 誊写至考卷 My favorite _______ My favorite Kunming My favorite dumplings My favorite noodles My favorite Xiao Ming My favorite life How is your life? Do you have delicious food? Do you have funny toys? I don’t mind them. My favorite life only need let me feel happy. On Saturday, I want to movie. But I have to finish all the homework . I think do homework is difficult, because I want to do other things. I like watch TV, play computer games. In Sunday morning, I reading books. In the afternoon, I went to gym. I play basketball all day. That made me feel very happy but very rierd. So in the night, I have to take a shower. This is my favorite life. How about you? My favorite life How is your life? Do you have delicious food? Do you have funny toys? I don’t mind them. My favorite life only need let me feel happy. On Saturday, I want to movie. But I have to finish all the homework . I think do homework is difficult, because I want to do other things. I like watch TV, play computer games. In Sunday morning, I reading books. In the afternoon, I went to gym. I play basketball all day. That made me feel very happy but very rierd. So in the night, I have to take a shower. This is my favorite life. How about you? My favorite food My favorite place My favorite animals My favorite food Hi, I’m Chen. I like china food. It’s very delicious: dumplings, noodles, fish… Oh, my favorite food is noodles, noodles is difficult but delicious, my favorite noodles is beef and tomato, egg and chicken, mutton and carrot. But I don’t like carrot and cabbage. I eating noodles every morning. And I like some ice cream. It’s cold. I favorite ice cream is banana ice cream and tomato ice cream. I like china food. My