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Error Correction Part3.7-6 Part3.7-7 Part3.7-8 Part3.7-9 Part3.5-7 Part3_6.5 Part3_6.6 Part3.7-6 Part3.7-7 * Unit 7 Debate on Human Cloning Planning your writing Warming-up activities Writing and revising * Unit 5 Internet Addiction * Unit 5 Internet Addiction 1. People under a lot of stress may experience headaches, to have minor pains and sleeping difficulties. People under a lot of stress may experience headaches, to have minor pains and sleeping difficulties. (lacking parallelism) Correct the mistakes in the following sentences and tell what kinds of mistakes they belong to. 2. Take part-time jobs can provide college students experience as well as money. Taking part-time jobs can provide college students with experience as well as money. Or: By taking part-time jobs, college students can gain experience as well as money. (two predicates in one sentence) She was very tense as she was waiting for the interview though because she knew there were a lot of candidates competing for the position in this big company. (misused conjunction) 3. China was called “the Middle Kingdom” because Chinese people in ancient times believed that its country was at the centre of the world. China was called “the Middle Kingdom” because Chinese people in ancient times believed that its their country was at the centre of the world. (misused pronoun) 4. She was very tense as she was waiting for the interview though she knew there were a lot of candidates competing for the position in this big company. 5. Mr. Johnson is under tremendous pressure in his work with heavy business responsibilities and, much as he would like to do so, he could not spend a whole day, or even a whole evening, with his children. Mr. Johnson is under tremendous pressure in his work with heavy business responsibilities and, much as he would like to do so, he could cannot spend a whole day, or even a whole evening, with his children. (improper use of tense) 6. They have studied advanced mathe