四级写作日常高频用法.ppt

四级辅导----写作专题 刘燕 2011年5月 得分要点 1. 内容是否紧扣主题，涵盖提示要点 2. 作文结构层次是否清晰 3. 语言表达是否流畅，有无重大语病，有无逻辑错误。 4. 是否能恰当的使用过度性语言 5. 作文字数是否达到要求 卷面是否整洁，书写是否漂亮 四级作文模式 1. 观点类 2. 批驳类 3. 办法类 4. 原因类 5. 谚语类 6. 应用类 7. 图标类 8. 记叙类 观点类 对立观点 My View on opportunity 1. 有的人认为机会是极少的，另一些人则认为人人都会有某种机会。 2. 你的看法如何？写出你的观点，说明你的理由并且适当举例。 3.在你的文章处不要忘记写出你的结论。 Different people have different views on…. Some people think that…, while others argue that…. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the former/latter opinion. For one thing, I firmly believe…. For another,…. taking all these factors into consideration, we may safely come to the conclusion that… Only if…can we…., just as the saying goes,….. My view on job-hopping 1. 有的人喜欢始终从事一种工作，因为。。。 2. 有的人喜欢经常换工作，因为。。。 3. 我的看法 People’s opinions are always different once they talk about…Those who…maintain that…They also firmly believe that… Many people think otherwise. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… My own opinion is that…If we want to… we have to… So, why not…? My view on college students’ taking part-time jobs 1.有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有益的 2. 有些人认为大学生做兼职工作是有害的 3. 我的看法 Nowadays more and more people voice growing concern over…Some people argue that…in that…, while others firmly hold that… Personally, I think this question should be probed in depth. On the one hand, the first group is not totally correct because…On the other hand,the second opinion seems not so satisfactory because…. From what has been discussed above, we can see clearly that the key lies in … Otherwise,… 事物性质 My view on double BA degree 1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见 2. 我对这一现象的看法 Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students…..In this way,… Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, Moreover,…In the third place,… Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and