科研选题与论文写作4论文写作中常出现的问题.ppt

句子的连接和信息的传承 使文章紧凑和连贯要注意两个方面： 内容: 信息，要连贯 用好连接词和连接用的副词 There is increasing interest in natural antioxidant products for use as medicines and food additives. Vitamin C, vitamin E and carotenoids are some of these widely used natural antioxidants . Reactive oxygen species (ROS) including superpxide anion radical, hydroxyl radical and hydrogen peroxide, are generated under physiological and pathological stresses in human body. 第一句和第二句都与 natural antioxidant有关，但第三句出现了reactive oxygen species,同前面的内容没什么关系,这时第三句同前面的传承上出现了断离.下面的改 动中加了个连接句子，把 natural antioxidant 和 reactive oxygen species 连 接了起来 .