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6. 对译文的润饰 这是翻译工作的最后一步。润饰文字主要看译者的汉语言文字功底如何，但也有技巧。总的要求是译文在忠于原文的基础上，必须完全符合汉语表达的语法要求，力求完整、准确，简练、通畅，切忌生硬、呆板，洋腔洋调。 一 （四）一些最基本的翻译技巧 Chapter 5 Writing of articles in specialized English 第四章 专业英语论文的写作 清末翻译家严复“信、达、雅” 傅雷“理想的译文仿佛是原作者的中文写作 ” 不说外行话 “只见树木，不见森林” 语言是否规范，是否符合汉语习惯 你铸铁中的硫好吗？ 铸铁中硫的影响及最佳含量 “知己知彼” 介词(前置词)是一种虚词,它不能单独担任句子成分,必须与名词或代词或相当于名词的其他词类,短语或从句 形合与意合，大量使用连接词，严谨与松散 （词义、词的搭配、词序） 穿与戴 heavy—machine，snow，traffic，fire green—sand，paper，body ， hands 目的与行动、结果与理由 魂断蓝桥 穿、戴 其它：习语、习俗：龙、黛玉、13、一石双鸟、一箭双雕 幽默 一、科技英语的文体 （Stylistics in Specialized English） 2) After a hole was made in a cork, a narrow glass tube was inserted and the cork was inserted into neck of a bottle filled with colored water. On doing this, some of the colored water rose in the tube. The level of the colored water in the tube was marked. Then the bottle was placed into a pan of hot water. Almost immediately, the water level in the tube fell slightly, but then it started to rise until the water overflowed. 1) We made a hole in a cork and pushed into a narrow glass tube. Then we pushed this into neck of a bottle which we had filled with colored water. When we did this some of the colored water went up into the tube. We marked the level of the colored water in the tube was marked. Then the bottle was placed into a pan of hot water. Almost immediately, the water level in the tube fell slightly, but then it started to rise until the water overflowed. 1) This piece of metal expanded when it was heated. It will contract when cooled. 这篇金属遇热膨胀，遇冷收缩。 Metals expand when heated and contract when cooled. 金属热胀冷缩 一、科技英语的文体 （Stylistics in Specialized English） （二）科技文章要求严密、精炼、清晰和简洁 The article of science and technology is of strictness, refine, in focus and of concision. Chapter 4 Translation of specialized English 第四章 专业英语的翻译 一、专业英语句子结构与分析（Structure and Analysus of Specialized English） 句子基本上由四种主要成分组成：主语、谓语、宾语和修饰语。 最根本成分是主语和谓语，修饰语（包括定语、状语、补语等）用来修饰主、谓、宾语。 句素：主、谓、宾、表、定、状、补语，从而构成不同种类的句子。 主语 +