有效地使用了语句间的连接成分使全文结构紧凑行文连贯条理清楚.ppt

* * 　如何算是一篇好文章？ －覆盖了所有的要点 －应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 －有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。 要点全 词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂） 连接词 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。 增强书面表达效果的技巧 2. 使用较丰富的句式 适当地运用一些词组，习语来代替单 个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采， 丰富语句的表现力． １)．You will find my house easily. You’ll have no trouble/difficulty finding my house. 2). She likes sports very much. She shows great interest in sports. Or: She is very fond of sports. She is crazy about sports. 4). I hope to receive your reply soon. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. 3. The experiment failed in the end. The experiment came to nothing in the end. 5). Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. Thanks to / Due to / Owing to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 6).We all think he is a great man. 　We all think highly of him . 二. 尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词短语或句型选择使用其他恰当的同义词,词组来代替． I like reading while my brother likes watching. 2. We’ve built a new classroom building besides the old one and we’ve also built a library where the old playground used to be. (enjoys) (set up) / (found) 三.适当运用分词或介词结构 １．When she heard the news, she began to cry. （使用V-ing形式）. Hearing the news, she burst out crying At the news, she burst into tears. 2. Mr Smith was invited by Nanjing University. Mr Smith wanted to make a speech on DNA. （使用V-ed形式）. Invited by Nanjing University, Mr Smith wanted to give a lecture on DNA. 四.适当使用一些主从复合句 来代替简单句或并列句. 2.To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. 1. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much. 五.适当打破常规，用一些倒装句，强调句或感叹句，为意思的表达增添一点新意． 1.He did not know what had happened until he read the news in the newspaper. It was not until he read the news in the news