ABC Writing 英语作文入门教材课程.ppt

ABC Writing----Sentence breakthrough(句子突破) Tutor: Devin Liu 2016高考英语全国卷1书面表达 第二节 书面表达 （满分 25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format） 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ? 佳作感悟----2016高考英语全国卷1范文 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am writing to you ask you for help.(首句说明来信目的) In order to accumulate some social experience (积累社会经验) and improve my work ability, I am going to take a part-time job during the summer vacation. I am quite interested in a position in a foreign company（对一个外资公司的职位感兴趣）and I have already written my application letter and my resume all in English. However, I’m afraid that there might be some grammar mistakes or inappropriate format（语法错误或不合适的格式） in the materials that I prepared. I would be so grateful（感激） if you can correct the mistakes and improve the format of the application and the resume for me. Your early reply would be highly appreciated（期待早日回复）. 基础写作的思路 写一完整的句子: 句子的完整 句子的连贯 句子的简洁 句子的多样化 主题句, 支撑句, 结论句 设计一个段落: 三段式篇章 Part 1: Form a sentence 这几句都正确吗? 如果你认为有误, 该怎么改? 1.The meeting will until 3:00. 2.Work hard, you will succeed. 3.I have a brother, who is a doctor. 4. There are only 4 students take part in the class. last and ^ ^ ^ who taking/to take 句子的分类 只包含一个主谓结构的句子. 主谓结构+ 连词(and, but, so, or……) +主谓结构 (或更多的主谓结构) 引导词+主谓结构, 主谓结构 (从句) 简单句: 并列句: 复合句: (主句) 并列句 用连词/副词 (and, but , so, for, or , not only…but also, either…or, neither…nor, while, both…and, however, therefore…)连接的几个简单句 1) Li Ming is 16 years old he is a student in No.2 Middle School. 2)Hurry up you’ll be late for school. 3)I must go now, my sister is waiting for me. and or for Practice: Complete the sentences 1.他虽然有病, 但是还是上学去了. 2.汤姆很穷, 而他的弟弟却发了财. 3.他丢了工作, 因此这些天心情不好. He was ill, he went to school. he was il