2008高三高考英语二轮专题复习增强书面表达效果的技巧教程.pptVIP

Welcome to our school How to improve your writing? This is My school. My school is very beautiful. There is a big playground in our school. There are many students like to play in the playground. And there is a big tree in our school. Everyday, there are many students sit under the tree to read English. In our school, there are many buildings, teaching buildings, lab building, library building and so on. This is very interesting. I very like my school. 24 高考书面表达评分原则 第五挡（很好）（21-25 分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务 * 覆盖所有主要内容 * 应用了较多语法结构和词汇 * 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误。但为尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致；具 有较强的语言应用能力 * 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 使全文紧凑，完全达到 了预期的写作目的 技 巧 1. 使用较高级的词汇 3. 使用恰当的连接词 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。 使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。 增强书面表达效果的 技巧 2. 使用较丰富的句式 一.选择具体的词语 1 He is a good man.(一般词汇) He is a _________________________ ________________________man.(具体词汇) He often helps us a lot/ He is patient with us. kind/ honest/generous/ brave /selfless/ warm-hearted… 2 The food is wonderful. (一般词汇 ) The food is ______________________ ___________________________.( 具体词汇 ) The food often reminds me of a wonderful memory. tasty/ delicious fresh/ abundant…  走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room但是小偷走出房间应该说：slip out of the room小姐走出房间应该说：sail out of the room小孩走出房间应该说： 老人走出房间应该说： dance out of the room stagger out of the room 1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. 二、用不同的词汇表达同一种意义(短语优先原则) We all think highly of him . A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck me. 1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型