【南方新课堂 金牌学案】高中英语人教版选修六课件：Unit 1.4SectionⅣ　Writing.pptVIP

思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 如何写建议信 假定你是李华,你在某英语论坛看到一个网名叫Marc发的求助帖子,请根据他的问题回帖。 I need your help! As a student aged 17,I’m bored with my obesity(肥胖) which results from my loving junk food and hating sports.Would you mind answering my questions? 1.What do you think of being fat? 2.What is your advice on my losing weight? 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 Hi Marc,       Yours, Li Hua 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 1.人称:第一人称。 2.时态:一般现在时及将来时态为主。建议信主要是对现在情况的说明(一般现在时)和对未来的建议(一般将来时)。 3.内容要点:建议信要简明扼要,具有合理性和说服力。建议信要写出写信的原因,建议的内容,提出建议的理由。语气要中肯、礼貌。论述要逻辑分明,合情合理。在说理过程中尽量站在对方的角度客观地谈问题,让对方考虑并接受自己的建议。 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 参考表达词汇: 1.对……烦　be bored with 2.对……很在乎　care much about 3.过……的生活　live a...life 4.改掉　get rid of 5.锻炼　take exercise 6.坚持做……　insist on doing 7.对……有害　be harmful to/do harm to 思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 常用句式: 建议信开头常用句式: 1.I’m writing to express my views concerning 　　　.  2.Thanks for trusting me. 3.I feel sorry to learn that... 表达建议常用句式: 1.I feel that it would be helpful if... 2.If I were you,I would 　　　.  3.As far as I’m concerned,　　　.  4.In my opinion,　　　.  5.As for me,　　　.  思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 建议信结尾常用句式: 1.I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations practical/useful/helpful. 2.I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in details. 3.I’m sure your problem will be settled 　　　.  思路点拨 素材积累 实战成篇 Hi Marc,  I feel sorry to learn that you are bored with your obesity.Teenagers usually care much about their figures,so obesity may be annoying.Though being fat is a problem,it is not everything.Fat people can still live a happy life.Therefore,don’t be upset. Anyway,you will have to get rid of your bad habits.First of all,taking enough exercise is the most practical way and it is important to insist on doing it every day.Then,do not eat too much junk food any more,which is also harmful to your health. I’m sure your problem will be settled so long as you take action. Yours, Li Hua