陕西考区高考英语作文点评.pptVIP

英语资料 　　亲爱的同学们，首先祝贺大家顺利结束高考。对于今年的英语作文，大家应该感到异常开心，因为实际就是我在课堂强调多次的模版都给烂了的现象类的议论文。对于“周五读报活动”这个现象的看法，分析原 因，最后提出自己的建议，简直一模一样，一点不差。只是需要在前面加一个称谓，因为是演讲稿。我们在课堂强调的句型和词汇全部可以派上用场，你用了没有。大家来看看吧，是不是全部是我们课堂强调过的内容。而且，关 于“读书活动周”，我们在强化班也讲过，很类似这次的“读报活动”，你可以去翻翻讲义的第五讲。　　某天，你班贴出了一张通知，请根据通知，内容要点和要求写一篇英语发言稿。　　内容要点：　　1 你对“周五读报 活动”的看法。　　2 陈述你的理由(可举例说明)。　　3 你的具体建议。　　My dear classmates,　　Our monitor suggests that we have Friday News Hour. As to this activity, I really suppose it is beneficial to us students. The reasons are as follows. ( There are a couple of reasons as follows.)　　To begin with, we can open our horizon and enlarge our konwledge by reading newspaper　　because it contains a lot of information. In addition, reading newspaper enables us to get closer to the world and know what happened at present at home an d abroad. For example, we may know more information about the massive earthquake in Sichuan the torc h relay of the Olympic Games in deferrent places. Last but not least, students may stay away from ne tbar due to the attraction of reading newspaper.　　From my perspective As far as Im concerned, the a ctivity should be held regularly on Friday. Apart from this, we can have some heated discussion base d on what we have read in newspwper.　　I do believe this activity will be of great benefit to us and attract every single student.　　范文解析：　　1. as to “就什么来说”， as to the climate ( 讲西安我的家乡时讲过)　　2. suppose “我认为”，有很多词来替换think包括 hold the viwe that, consider　　3. be beneficial tobe of great benefit to “对什么有好处 ”，我的嘴都说出泡的表达。　　4. The reasons are as follows. “原因如下”，强调过N次的模版句。　　5. to begin with in addition apart fromlast but not least 也是说破嘴的逻辑词　　6.open ones horizen 开阔视野 enlarge ones knowledge 增长知识　　7.at home and abroad “国内外”　　8. enable sb to so sth “使某人做某事”，我们讲义上还有　　9. torch relay 这是我在各个班最后都提到的“火炬传递”，高考阅卷下周 二在外院开始，老师们看到这个很新颖的举例，你的分数自然不会低　　10. due to “由于”，to是介词，当时还讲了owning to, thanks to ,进行了区别　　11. from my perspective as far as im concerned “就我来看”，我讲过N+1次的　　12. heated discussion “激烈讨论”，正反观点类模版第一句中讲过