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书面表达学生观摩篇 【浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷】 书面表达（满分30分） 假设你是高中学生王敏，当你听说当地政府打算把你所在的有着百年历史的老学校从市中心迁至郊区时，你决定给市长写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求： 1. 简述你写信的目的及你对此事的观点； 2. 说明你的理由。 Dear Sir, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Wang Ming, A student of xxx School 【参考范文】书面表达 A possible version Dear Sir, It is said that our local government is going to move our school to the suburb. I am now writing to express my opinion that it is more advisable to keep the school where it is. For one thing, it is more convenient for both students and teachers to get to the present school which is located in the center of the city. If it is moved to the suburb, it surely will bring students, especially their parents, much trouble. For another, as a school with a history of one hundred years, her value mainly lies in the signs left by time. We can put up new buildings and plant new trees, but we cannot rebuild such reminders of memory. Therefore, I suggest the school not be moved. Wang Ming, A student of xxx School 【陕西省咸阳市2014高考模拟考试书面表达（满分30分） 假如你是李华，请你根据以“老人摔倒你会扶吗？”为主题的班会调查结果及你自已的意见给《英语周报》写一篇演讲稿，要点如下： 注意： 1.总词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ladies and gentlemen, Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，让整个文章成为了一个有机的整体。如However、Why not? First、Second、In