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学生作文中存在的问题 在实际写作中，学生在语法方面的问题是相当多的。这里既有学生语言基础薄弱的原因，也有母语干扰的因素，还有学生缺乏经常性的写作练习的原因。归纳起来，主要体现在以下几个方面： 指代方面 在使用it, he , she ,this, which, one 等代词时，前面句子中应出现明确的先行词。不少学生在使用这些代词时表达不清楚，结果造成意思上的含糊不清。例如： A. Many students want to get a very good job that can bring someone much money and reputation. People try to resist the influence of TV commercials, but it is often useless. When he went by the dog pound, they rushed to the fence and barked at him. The father told the son that he was going to be late. 修饰方面 英语中的修饰语应该紧挨着被修饰的成分，并和它有明确的逻辑关系。学生在写作中不了解这一基本原则，就会使修饰语的位置不当，造成修饰关系不明，引起歧义。例： A. To keep the air clear in our city, we must move the factories that give off poisonous gases to the countryside. B. With television, people can get information that comes from other parts of the world immediately. 一致方面 在一个句子里，或彼此邻的两三个句了里，应该保持时态、人称、数等的一致性。例： A. College graduates take a good position, a handsome salary and a satisfactory working condition into consideration when they chose a job. B. Whether one enjoys or resents TV commercials, we are actually bombarded with it every time when people turn on their TV. 平行方面 在一个句子里或紧邻的几个句子里，在表达相同，相近或相对的几个意思时，所使用的句子应保持语法结构的一致，否则易造成结构混乱。例： A. When universities and colleges put quality education into practice, students’ potentials can be brought into full play. B. TV has informative and educational function, and it is very entertaining. C. The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world and human being. 断句方面 一个句子没有结束， 又开始新的一句， 使句子结构不全，造成“唐突句”。例： A. TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. B.There are so many ways to improve city traffic. For example, widening streets, building subways and so on. C.Nuclear power has some distinct advantages, such as it is clean and cheap. D.Apart from academic ability, a graduate who wants to be employed in a big company should have three good personality traits: A good sense of humor, sensitivity to others’ deeds and skill in special relations. 连词方面 作文中缺少必要的连