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Argument官方范文 句型结构标注 By msesmart 2011 HUST 第一篇文章 Hospital statistics regarding people who go to the emergency room after rollerskating accidents indicatethe needfor more protective equipment. Within this group ofpeople, 75 percent of thosewho hadaccidents instreets orparking lots were notwearing any protective clothing (helmets, kneepads, etc.) or any light-reflecting material (clip-on lights, glow-in-the-dark wrist pads, etc.). Clearly, these statistics indicate that by investing in high-quality protective gear and reflective equipment, rollerskaters will greatly reduce their risk of being severely injured in an accident. 原题逻辑顺序为：数据显示了对保护装备的需求==〉展开说明这个数据是怎样显示这样的需求的（即 用这个装备有什么效果）==〉结论：为了达到这个效果我们应该重金买这保护设备。 Benchmark 6 The notion that protective gear reduces the injuries suffered in accidents seems at first glance to be an obvious conclusion. After all, it is the intent of these products to either prevent accidents from occuring in the first place or to reduce the injuries suffered by the wearer should an accident occur. However, the conclusion that investinginhigh quality protective gear greatly reduces the risk ofbeing severely injured in an accident may mask(conceal / cover up) other (and potentially more significant) causes(reasons) of injuries and may inspire people to over invest financially and psychologically in protective gear. First of all, as mentioned in the argument, there are two distinct kinds of gear -- preventative gear (suchas lightreflectingmaterial)andprotective gear(suchashelmets). Preventativegearisintended to warn others, presumably for the most part motorists, of the presence of the roller skater. It works onlyifthe otherisa responsibleand caringindividual who will affordthe skaterthenecessary space andattention. Protective gear is intendedto reduce the effectof any accident, whetherit is caused by another, the skater or some force of nature. Protective gear does little, if anything, to prevent accidents bu