英语专四作文写作辅导.pptxVIP

专四-写作辅导1商英教研室主要内容评分标准写作问题自我剖析互评题型分析应对模板一、评分标准写作问题剖析What’s wrong with your composition?知己know about yourselfFinish the composition in the 2016 TEM4.And reflect on the problems about your composition.内容结构语言得体词汇句子切题；论证充分。有条理；层次清晰。无拼写问题；恰当、准确、地道。无语法错误；无标点问题；句式多样。语气恰当1.内容结构：面对新题型————材料作文，无所适从，容易跑题，不知道怎么展开？是否条理、层次清晰？2.词汇：拼写错误？用词简单，不地道，显得low?This policy can make the farmer’s financial burden less and less.This policy can relieve the farmer’s financial burden.To be continued…3.句子：语法错误：主谓一致，虚拟语气…句式单一不高级无新意（是否是模板的锅？）模板可以借鉴，但要用有新意的！Switch your composition with your partner, and exchange constructive remarks on each other’s composition.What’s wrong with your composition?二、题型分析应对分值：20大于200词45分钟题型：材料作文、命题作文、图表图画作文材料作材料作文Read carefully the following excerpt (about…) and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:Summarize the main message of the excerpt, and thenComment on whether …You should(can) support yourself with information from the excerpt.材料作文三段式开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结重申自己观点命题作文三段式开头：引出主题→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结重申自己观点图表图画作文三段式开头：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点主体：论证自己的观点结尾：总结重申自己观点三种题型的实质不同材料作文开头：缩写/总结材料→提出个人观点命题作文：引出主题→提出个人观点图表图画作文：描述图表图画内容→提出个人观点材料作文的开头如何缩写/总结材料1.抓取关键信息关键句2.如何缩写提取出来的关键句：同义单词/短语替换;去掉修饰成分；用几个抽象概括词取代一堆具体词（比如头衔etc）；如果是引言，用概括后的间接引语代替直接引语缩写/总结材料的注意事项：1.不要篇幅太长，2.切不可一字不差地照抄原文。Exercise:The beginning part of the 2017 TEM4 Writing 参考With the wide use of intelligent machines, people began to worry about their threat to human intelligence. They hold the idea that even if the artificial intelligence is of great help to human jobs and facilitates human life, the development of the artificial intelligence will unavoidably deprive human of mental effort and cause the regress of brain. From my perspective,…命题作文的开头引出话题的方法1.背景介绍——改写题干中背景/摆出两种对立的观点/简单分析现象原因或结果Nowadays, there follows a craze for…With the development of …, … is becoming a more and more serious problem.The early 1990s saw an unprecedented tide of …In the past three decades, China