大学英语最新六级写作及完形讲解2010611.docVIP

2010新东方六级模考写作分析及范文 下面给出常见的一个写作范文，其中的很多语句可以当做模板使用： Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay stating he Advantages and Disadvantages of Living in College Dormitories. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese. ? 1、住集体宿舍的益处 2、住集体宿舍的不便之处 3、你对住集体宿舍的看法 从题目中可以看到这是四六级写作中很典型的一个题型：对比观点选择题。这种题型的出题方式很简单，就是给出一个有争议的话题，然后列出三点提纲：（1）正面观点或支持观点；（2）负面观点或否定观点；（3）你的观点。 比较推荐的文章逻辑结构：4段，起-承-转-合；10-12句，3-5个连接词，3-5个从句 结构上一定要牢记总分总，具体执行是：篇章上首位两端总述，中间段落分述。在发展段落中采取总分结构，首句总说，接下来分述支撑观点。下面我们一起看下“起承转合”段的写法： “起”段的写法： Paragraph One: （1）引出将要评论的事物或是观点 （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同观点 Should we live in college dormitories? There is an ongoing heated discussion among most students, and every one has his own view. （模板表达） “承”段的写法： Paragraph Two: （2）本段的支持性分论点 （3）本段总结（可以省略） 总述：有些同学喜欢住在寝室。 Some students prefer living in the dormitory. 分论点：方便、经济、安全（） First of all, it is convenient for them to have access to the dinning hall, classrooms and other facilities on campus. Secondly, it is economical to live in the dormitory for it will not cost too much money. And whats more, it is safer to live in the dormitory. “转”段的写法： Paragraph Three: （2）提出另一种观点或缺点 （3）本段的支持性分论点 （4）本段总结（可以省略） 总述：有些人认为住寝室有诸多不便。 However, as other students point out, there are some disadvantages of living in college dormitories. 分论点：太吵、没有隐私 On (the) one hand, living in the dormitory may be noisy sometimes, especially when a student plans to get down to his study while his roommates are playing computer games and talking loudly in the dormitory. One the other hand, living in the dormitory provides the students with less privacy, which may be a big challenge for some students. “合”段的写法： Paragraph Four: （1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点 There is some truth in both argument. However, as far as I am concerned, the benefits of living in college dormitories are superior to the disadvantages. Therefore I would like to live in the dormi