高中英语高分写作一本通：夯实写作基础+打造写作亮点.pdfVIP

第二部分 夯实写作基础 ·打造写作亮点 词汇升级 高考书面表达最高档次的评分标准中，要求“词汇丰富，有修辞意识，显示出较强的语 言运用能力”。因此要想在高考英语写作中取得高分，就必须使用一定的高级词汇，为文章 增加闪光点，从而提高文章的档次。试比较下列几组句子并体会划线部分的表达效果。 a. ①She is a good girl. ②She is a sympathetic / warm –hearted / generous girl. b. ①The society still makes women unable to enjoy equal rights. ②Women are still denied equal rights in the society. c. ①Not all the books can do good to us. ②Not all the books can benefit us. d①We’ll try our best to protect the environment. ②We’ll spare no effort to protect the environment. 显然第②组的高级词汇更能为文章增色，这些词语的巧妙使用犹如酷暑里的冷饮，给阅 卷老师带来丝丝凉意，更能吸引阅卷老师的注意力。在平常的学习中我们可以尝试从以下三 个角度提升所用词汇的档次。 1.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词以增加文采。如用make use of 替代use, 用catch sight of 替代see 等。 2.使用一些很有“洋味”的词语。如： Thank you for sharing the time with us. (用share 不用spend) The way he views the world is very practical. (用view 而不用look at) The noise nearly drove me mad. (用drive 而不用make) 3.避免重复使用同一单词或短语。如： I like reading while my brother enjoys (不用likes) watching TV. 附：英语书面表达中常见的高级词汇替换 1. seek 替换want / look for They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees. 2. average 替换ordinary I’m an average ( ordinary ) student. 3. seat 替换sit On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried. 4. suppose 替换should He is supposed to (should) have driven more slowly. 5. the case 替换 true I don’t think it is the case (true). 6. on 替换as soon as As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research.. 7. due to 替换because of He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm. 8. round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby ① The summer vacation is round the corner (coming). Do you have any plans? ② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 1 9. come to light 替换discover The family were so pleased when they di