GRE范文及赏析Issue33智课网.pdf

智课网GRE 备考资料 GRE 官方写作题库 33 As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and mysterious. 范文 As knowledge increases through observing, analyzing, and understanding, things around us become less mysterious but more complex. In the following discussion, I would like to present evidence to support my view. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 第一句开门见山地点出了作者对题目所谈问题的观点：通过 观察、分析和理解增长的知识使我们身边的事物变得不那么 神秘但更复杂了。第二句表明作者将在下文展开论述。 此段功能 立论段。针对题中所述，作者直接给出了自己的看法。因为 题目围绕知识增多与世间万物的（1 ）神秘度/可理解度 和 （2 ）复杂度的关系。 The more knowledge we have about the world around us, the less things become mysterious. Let’s look at the case of diseases, for example. In ancient times, the people regarded diseases as the punishment from God. It is obviously absurd for modern people to recognize disease as a punishment but rather a result of infection. Modern people understand that pathogens, viruses, bacteria, or parasites are responsible for disease rather than some supernatural strength beyond our scope of recognition. In understanding this, people can better respond to disease. However, the more we know about disease, the more we realize that we don’t know. There is still much work to do in the field of disease research. 内容 详细条目 段落 此段结构 总分结构。第一句话提出论点，告诉读者随着人对世间万物 知识的增长，它们变得不如以前神秘了。接下来，以人对疾 病的认识为例，表明人们了解的越多，疾病的神秘感越弱。 本来它是“神的惩罚”，但其实它是由病原体等很多微生物 引起的现象。了解（知识增多）之后，人们对疾病得以更佳 掌控了。 此段功能 论点一，围绕知识增多后事物的神秘度展开论述，关注的重 点是万物变得不那么神秘了。 Secondly, when things are well understood, related matters are more easily comprehended. Let’s look again to the example of disease. In the old days, a witch doctor with no medical knowledge assumed the