2018年高考英语二轮专题复习总结课件：题型六--书面表达第3讲-四档升五档-要点呈现“有花样”.ppt

结 束 第3讲 四档升五档，要点呈现“有花样” 作文升格 名师金指 应用体验 结 束 四档晋升五档，仅差美化之功 从“第四档”与“第五档”的评分标准来看，四档与五档的评分标准差别是微小的，主要集中在“亮点词汇”、“亮点句式”、“过渡衔接”、“行文结构”等一些能力层级上，虽然这两个档次的评分标准区别比较细微，但四档与五档的分差却成为考生成绩平庸与优异的分水岭。 五档评分标准中有“覆盖所有内容要点”，这表明“要点全而不漏”是作文得高分的必要条件。 第五档中提到，“应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。”这就是说，如果考生仅运用基础词汇和基本句型，不能体现出较强的语言运用能力，即使表达无语法错误，也不一定能得高分；相反，即使文章中有少量错误，如果是因为使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致，文章仍可按最高档次给分。 第五档中“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑”，这表明恰当运用过渡性词语可以使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然，从而提高得分档次。 名 师 解 读 Dear Henry， The Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition is to be held in the art gallery next Sunday in our city center, which lasts from 8：00 am to 5：00 pm.I’m writing to invite you to attend it.Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China and it has a history of more than 1,500 years.People often use it to decorate their home during festivals and weddings.In this exhibition, you can see all kinds of paper-cutting patterns.In addition, some famous artists will perform how to cut paper on the spot.I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further.Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua “冤屈的”四档作文(得分18分) Dear Henry， I am writing to invite you to attend the Chinese paper-cutting art exhibition to be held in the art gallery from 8：00 am to 5：00 pm next Sunday in our city center. Paper-cutting is a traditional art form in China, which has a history of more than 1,500 years.People often beautify their home with paper-cutting during festivals and weddings.In this exhibition, you can see paper-cutting with all kinds of patterns.In addition, there are famous artists who will perform how to cut paper on the spot.I wish that you could grasp this opportunity to learn traditional Chinese culture further. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely， Li Hua 升格后的五档作文(得分24分) 左栏作文要点全面、语言准确，而且使用了非谓语动词、复合句以及虚拟语气等，总体来说是一篇相当不错的作文。但是，文章没有分段，缺少框架意识，把所有内容混搭在一起，给阅卷老师判卷带来了困难，从而影响了得分。 升格后的右栏作文分成了三段：第一段介绍了展览的时间、地点并发出邀请