第6讲_句子的译：简洁、精炼(二).pptVIP

译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 见丈人在眼前，恐怕又要挨骂。 The sight of his father-in-law made Fanjin afraid that he was in for another cursing. 一想起这件事情，他就会觉得生活增添了许多滋味。 The remembrance of this incident will add zest to his life. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 3、主语的内容为心理对象，谓语选择slip, lend, elude, escape, stump, fail等词汇，宾语选择逻辑施事。 我想不起他的名字。 His name escaped me at the moment. 这个句子把我给难住了。 The sentence eludes me. 我理解不了这个词。 The word failed me. 她长得不漂亮，又没有钱，还不太聪明。 Like good looks and money, quick-mindedness passed her by. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 4、名词或名词化结构表示原因、目标，谓语动词使用“使……产生变化”的词汇。包括①使失去(deprive, cost, rob, bereave, disarm, prevent, diminish)；使增加(add, enbolden, brighten, win)；使无能(disable, incapcitate, disqualify)；使赋能(enable, empower, qualify,)；使免除(save, exonerate)；②使保持状态(keep, make, )；③状态变化类动词（throw, get, bring, temper） 屠户被众人局不过，只得连斟两碗喝了，壮一壮胆，将平日的凶恶样子拿出来。 Two bowls of wine bolstered up his courage, making him lose his scruples and start his usual rampaging. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 他因为有犯罪记录，所以不能进入斯坦福大学学习。 His criminal record disqualified him from the addmission of Standford University. 早点出发，中午你就会到达那里。 An early start will get you there at noon. 仔细比较一下，就会发现这两者在本质上是不同的。 A careful comparison will show there is no resemblance between the two in nature. 他非常气愤，话都说不出来。 Indignation bereft him of speech. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 他的结局很悲惨，人们批评他的时候也不再那样严厉了。 His melancholy end disarms censure of its asperity. 小妹心地善良，性情温和，对她朋友的这种没有心肝的行为，实在看不顺眼。 My sister’s kindly and gentle nature could not but revolt at her friend’s callous behaviour. 华盛顿给康威的短信，言简意赅，使他们陷入一片慌乱之中。 The loconic nature of Washingtong’s note to Conway had thrown them all in confusion. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 房子位于荒废的小巷里，破败陈旧，一片凄凉。 The old and dilapidated house in the deserted lane made a dismal picture. 议会解散以后，出现了动荡局面。 Congress dissolution saw violent scenes. 他的健康状况很差，无法实现他的梦想。 Poor health incapacipated (disabled) him from realizing his dream. 译者在简洁问题上需注意的要点 5、将时间、处所作为主语 十天以后，他的军队就会土崩瓦解，他也就只剩下1400人了。 Ten days would disband his corps and leave him 1400 men. 1840-