2012高考英语一模作文.doc

2012英语一模作文（西城） 海淀一模 书面表达（共两节，35分） 第一节 情景作文 （20分） 假设你是红星中学高二（1）班的学生李华。下面四幅图描述了上周五你参加的一次拓展训练活动。请根据图片的先后顺序，用英语为校刊写一篇短文。词数不少于60。 参考词汇：outward bound 拓展训练 2012年海淀区一模考试情景作文试卷分析 此次海淀一模情景作文依旧是沿袭2007年至2011年北京卷 “四幅图情景作文”的出题方式，题目中规中矩，难度中等，有一定的区分度，考察课外活动的主题，学生比较容易下笔。 就内容层面，考生要结合要点和细节展开写作，如第一幅图的要点是到达基地，细节为乘坐校车、教师分组、周围环境衬托。第二幅图的要点是我们跳断桥，细节是心理活动。第三幅图的要点是翻越逃生墙，细节是大家努力。最后一幅图的要点是合影留念，细节是我们的心情和收获。 就文章的组织结构来讲，考生要具有分段意识，可以每幅图一段，亦可安排为总分总的三段式，这样设计出来的文章要求字数在150左右。开头结尾要有所包装和设计，句段之间有必要的衔接。 就语言形式方面，考生要注意语言的多样性，从词句两方面着手练习，掌握常见图画的写作方法，在平时的练习和今后的应试中进行运用。 Had it not been for the hard-won opportunity given by our mother school, we would not have participated in the outward bound. Last Friday, I, together with my classmates, headed for the Outward Bound Centre merrily by the school bus in that the charming view significantly feasted our eyes as well as the coming activity seemed exciting but challenging. Upon arrival, we were sorted into several groups under the guidance of our coach. The first impression of the meaningful day was the dangerous broken bridge. Owing to the fact that most of us were new to it, I was extremely frightened. The encouragement of the coach and our spirit of teamwork, however, helped me make it. The second impression of the unforgettable experience was climbing over the wall to “escape”. We spared no effort to make contributions to the program; as a consequence, all the participants succeeded in achieving the goal. Everything finished, we felt exhausted but delighted. Next came the most satisfying moment. A picture of all members was taken to memorize this extracurricular activity. Awards such as “Prize for teamwork” and “Prize for courage” were sent to those who stood out. Please allow me to express my sincere appreciation to this extracurricular activity, for not only did we win trust of others, but also build up courage as well as improve sense of cooperation. 第二节 开放作文 （15分） 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。 In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the f