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关于作文的修改 词 修改前： Education is very important to one’s career and future. Most of the young people in China hope to get higher education at college. However, the tuition for college education is quite high, it is really quite difficult for some students to afford the money. How can one get enough money to pay the tuition? In fact, there are many ways to solve the problem. First, one can get financial assistance from parents and relatives. This is the most common practice. Secondly, students can do some part-time jobs while studying. They can use the money they earn to pay their tuition. Besides these two ways, one can get loan from the bank. This way has become more and more popular. Among the three means mentioned above, I think the third is most suitable for me. As I am from the countryside and my family is quite poor, my parents cannot afford so much money. Besides, I don’t think the second way is quite good, because doing part-time jobs surely deprives some time from my study. Study is the most important task for me when I am at college. Therefore, the third way is the best one for me. 修改后： Education is of great importance to one’s career and future. The majority of the young people in China hope to obtain higher education at college. However, the tuition for college education is much higher than what some students can afford. How can one get enough money to pay the tuition? As a matter of fact, many ways can contribute to the solution of the problem. To begin with, one can get financial assistance form parents and relatives. This is the most common practice. Secondly, students can earn some pocket money by doing some part-time jobs. The earned money can be used to pay their tuition. In addition to these two ways, one can acquire loan from the bank, which has enjoyed increasingly popularity among college students. Among the three means mentioned above, I hold the third kind is most preferable. As I am from the countryside and my family is not well-off, my parent