英语课件：Shape of my composition.pptVIP

Simplify the sentences (1)The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen. (with) Homework Add some self-opinions on the composition * Shape of my composition neat and tidy Which is your preference? well-shaped rich in content Decorations Outer appearance Inner qualities Decorations (装饰) Basic elements (元素) of a ‘Beauty’ Learn to ‘shape’ handwriting paragraphs WordsPhrases Enrich the text (拓展) Conjunction words (连词) ‘little words’ such as Adv. Sentence patterns(句式) (3)I have a surprise to give you. (for) (2)I am writing to tell you something that has taken place in our school. (about) (1)我等待着你的到来。 I’m waiting for you to come . (2)工人们热烈欢迎我们来参观农场。 The workers welcomed us to visit the farm. (3)我听说你在学中文,我很高兴听说这件事。 I hear you are learning Chinese. I am very glad to hear that. Making-up (1) Im looking forward to your arrival. (2) The workers gave us a warm welcome to the farm. (3) I’m very glad to hear that you’re learning Chinese. Avoid simple repetition Avoid word for word translation and focus on connection Plus necessary details to make clear expressions The 7-day National Day Holiday is going to be cancelled due to some reasons. Combat Exercise 实战演习 1 Travelling causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. 2 Travellers’ bad behaviors damage the environment. Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday. 3 2 1 It’s good to be close to nature and relax. It’s good to be with family members and communicate. Composition 新闻报道政府决定取消十一国庆长假，此消息一出引起了大家的强烈讨论： 赞同决定者认为： 1出游者众多造成交通拥挤甚至交通事故 2游客破坏旅游景点，造成污染 3旅途劳累影响假期归来后的工作和学习 反对决定者认为： 1有利于接近自然，修养身心 2有利于家人团聚、交流 +Self-opinion CCTV news says that the 7-day Natinal Holiday is going to be cancelled. Some people agree with the decision. They think travelling causes heavy traffic and more traffic accidents. Travellers’ bad behaviors damage the environment. Travelling makes people too tired to work or study after holiday. Others don’t agree with the decision.