英语书面表达“五步成文法”导学案例.pptVIP

英语书面表达“五步成文法”导学案例 【指导写作过程】 第一步 ： 仔细审题，提炼要点. 第二步：根据要点，选择熟悉的词汇、短语或句式. 第三步：选择合适的时态和语态，用恰当的英语句子，列出各要点. 第四步：选择恰当的相关连接词汇和过渡语句. 第五步：巧连妙接，连“点”成段，组段成章。 【作文题目】 最近，你就假期补课的问题进行了一次调查。请根据下表的调查结果写一篇120词左右的短文。 第一步 ： 仔细审题，提炼要点 第二步：根据要点，选择熟悉的词汇、短语或句式 第三步：选择合适的时态和语态，用恰当的英语句子，列出各要点： 1I have made a survey about having extra lessons during the holidays. 2Both teachers and students are very tired and need holidays to relax and rest. 3The students benefit from developing their interest and enjoying some social activities during the holidays. 4Through their holidays ,the students can improve and develop themselves 5The students can make up the lessons that they are lacking in and learn something more 6Parents are not satisfied with the cost of having extra lessons 7It is much better to have teachers take care of their children than leave them about. And their students are sure to learn something ,however little it is. 第四步：选择恰当的相关连接词汇和过渡语句 1 根据这篇作文内容，选择如下词语和句子： 最近 recently 2（过渡句）下面是调查结果 The following is the result. 3教师不同意假期补课 Teachers are against giving extra lessons. 4在他们看来 in their opinion 5而……（表对比） while …… 6（过渡句）家长有不同的看法 Parents have different ideas. 第五步：巧连妙接，连“点”成段，组段成章。 有了以上细致的深思熟虑和全面的酝酿筹备，整篇作文的“建筑工程”就会得心应手地顺利完工： Recently I have made a survey about students’ having extra lessons during the holidays. The following is the result. Teachers are against giving extra lessons. They think that both teachers and students are very tired and they all need holidays to relax and rest. In their opinion, the students will benefit from developing their interest and enjoying some social activities during their holidays. 58 percent of the students consider that they need more time to relax, prepare for a better start and improve and develop themselves. While 42 percent enjoy it and they think the students can make up the lessons that they are lacking in and also they can learn something more. Parents have different ideas. They are not satisfied with the cost of havin