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高分作文技巧指导 ----丑小鸭变白天鹅魔法一： 适当运用高级词汇 在写作中“较高级词汇”的使用主要是指使用《大纲》上没有的词语、使用通过构词法变化来的新词、使用同(近)义词或反义词等来代替常见词语。在造句时,“较高级词汇”如能运用贴切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一个，也会使你的作文显示出与众不同。’m very interested in English. I’m quite / extremely interested in English 2. 我们的校园位于市中心。 Our school is in the center of the city. Our school is located in the center of the city Our campus situates in the center of the city 3.放学后，我们很多作业。 we have a lot of homework to do. After school, we have endless homework to do. 4) 我们可以得到社会及工作经验。 We can get some working and social experience We can obtain some working as well as social experience 5． 洗澡间和厨房都很好。 The bathroom and the kitchen are good. The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished在造句时,既要使句子生动，又要使其简明扼要。.使用一些强势句式，如强调句、感叹句、倒装句等，增强语句的表现力。使用特别是打破汉语句子结构的束缚而重组的句子。 My brother is a college student, and he is glad to help others. → My brother who is a college student is glad to help others. （使用从句）→ My brother, who is a college student, is glad to help others. → My brother, a college student, is glad to help others. （使用）→ We should try our best to help him → We should spare no effort to help him → We should help him as far as we can. → We should do whatever we can to help him. 实战训练： 1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much about it. （使用名词性从句） ? 2. Though ? 3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the? newspaper.(使用强调句型) ? 4. I passed the exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气） ? 5. She and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) ? 6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) ? 7. I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） ??? 8. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）9．e arrived ,he began to work. (使用倒装句)… the more…的句型) 参考答案： What makes him surprised is that the little girl knows so much about it. It surprises him that the little girl knows so much about it. Young as he is , he knows a lot. It was not until he had read the news in the? newspaper that he knew what had happened But for for your help, I wouldn