IELTS写作 V3.ppt

* BETTER My son had to change schools when my busy work schedule made it necessary for me to move houses. The aims of our present-day cultures seem to be shorter hours, higher salary and a better life. 单个副词。副词有两种，一种是虚副词，表示的是语气，如：certainly, probably等。另一种是实副词或评论性副词，他们表示的是具体的语义。如：hopefully, mistakenly, socially等，这些词是开放性的，用在句子中往往可以有一个短语，甚至一个句子的意思。 例句：瘾君子对“禁止吸烟”的牌子视若无睹，真是无可救药。 Tobacco addicts remain blind to signs that say no smoking. They are hopeless. Tobacco addicts remain hopelessly blind to signs that say no smoking. *EXERCISE Nevertheless, recent alarms about this problem caused wide public concern. This is understandable. Yet it is apparent that millions of people who would never think of themselves as lawbreakers, as they are running the red light. The fact is painful. BETTER Nevertheless, recent alarms about this problem understandably caused wide public concern. Yet it is painfully apparent that millions of people who would never think of themselves as lawbreakers, as they are running the red light. 抽象名词。有些单个抽象名词，词化程度高，本身就包含一个短语或者句子的内容。如下面的abundance, aspiration, realization, 其中已经有物质和人的内容。 未来将是一个物质不断丰富，人的愿望永不满足的世界。 The future is a world in which the materials are getting abundant, and man is aspiring. The future is a world in which ever growing abundance is matched by ever rising aspiration. *EXERCISE I saw that the doctor arrived. I doubt that the professor is clever. Alex was disappointed by the fact the reviewers criticized his play in a hostile manner. BETTER I saw the doctor’s arrival. I doubt the doctor’s cleverness. Alex was disappointed by the reviewers’ hostile criticism of his play. 身份名词。身份名词就是由动词派生过来表示一个人身份，职业的名词，他们往往可以表示一个动词意义。earners=earn, teacher=teach, supporters=support Those people who object to the program argue that it will flood many cities and villages. Opponents to the program argue that it will flood many cities and villages. *EXERCISE Many parents are worried that without TV, their children would like them to play with them. It is imp