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假期会做的事： Sun bath 日光浴 Build a sand castle 做沙堡 Take a picture 照相 surf 冲浪 Buy a souvenir 买纪念品 Ride a jet ski 骑水上摩托 Scuba diving 潜水 Windsurf 玩帆船 Sleep on a hammock 睡吊床 Go sightseeing Go mountain-climbing Try the ferry tour Go to the amusement park ….. 16分版本 First， we went to the beach. We swam in the sea and sunbathed. It is so good. 分析：内容过于平淡，没有亮点，短句过多，还有语法错误。 满分版本 We first spent a whole day on the beach swimming and sunbathing， which was so enjoyable that nobody wanted to leave the beach at the end of the day. 分析：句子结构精炼，使用分词做伴随状语，so…that结构，非限的使用添亮点。同时为后面铺垫。 连词： Not only...but also... Not only…but …as well Neither...nor... Either...or... Both...and... 好词好句--结尾： It is Miss Liu who gives me the hope of life. It is Miss Liu who influenced me the most in my life. My memory for him will never fade away….. 评价类短语： be?popular?with? be?respected?by be?honored?as be?considered?as be?famous?for be?regarded?as set?a?good?example 受···欢迎 被···所尊敬 被尊称为··· 被认为/看作是·· 因···而著名 被认为/当作是·· 树立好的榜样 人物类作文好词好句总结： 1.最高级 ······the+形容词最高级+名词+（that）+I have ever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc) e.g Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。 2.比较级表最高级 Of all the people I know, perhaps no one deserves my respect more than ..... e.g Of all the people I know, perhaps no one deserves my respect more than Miss. Wang, my English teacher. 在我所认识的人当中，也许没有一个人比我的英文老师王老师更值得我尊敬。 3.欲扬先抑 使用让步状语从句，引出主题。 Although…., ….still/yet….. Though, ….still/yet…. e.g Although?he?has?been?away?for?many?years,?he? still?lives?in?my?heart?now.? 虽然他去世很多年了，但他依然活在我的心中。 4.排比结构 He?is?considered?as?an?honest,?humorous? teacher?and?he?is?respected?and?loved?by?the?students?and?other?teachers.? 他是一位诚实幽默的老师，而且被学生以及其他老师所尊敬和喜欢。 5.非限引出说明成分 This picture always reminds me of my teacher, who used to give me piano lessons every Friday. 请用非限来合并下列句子： I can never forget Miss Wang. She was my English teacher. I can never forget Miss Wang, who was my English Teacher. Miss Wang, whom I