外研社版高一英语第一册Module1Myfirstdayatseniorhigh一轮复习 ppt课件.pptVIP

第1讲　Module 1 My First Day at Senior High;; 写作要点： 1．表明自己的看法； 2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)； 3．提出至少两条建议。 要求： 1．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。 2．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。 3．书写须清晰、工整。 Hi，TigerMom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is___________________________________;【精彩美文】 Hi，TigerMom， What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission，development in wisdom，emotion，health，and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the;pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore，punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly，let her live like a lovely girl；let her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. ;【全品点睛】 ①行文逻辑：提出观点→解释原因→给出建议。较好地使用了连接词语，如：furthermore，more importantly等。 ②词汇短语：运用了较高难度的词汇。如：evaluate，university admission，development in wisdom，never be ignored，turn out not to be, by no means等。 ;③句式句法：运用了多样化的句式和句法结构。如：主语从句：What puzzles you is actually a puzzle…；表语从句：My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so./The reason is often that the pressure from their…；宾语从句：…that you take your friends advice；状语从句：Although high grades are an important factor…/as they were expected以及there be句型：There are many examples around us.等。 ;;6. ___________ adj. 尴尬的， 难堪的 → __________ v. 使困窘， 使局促不安→ _____________ adj. 令人为难的 → embarrassment n. 窘迫；为难 7. __________ n. 行为， 举止→behave v. 举动， 举止 8. __________ n. 描述；形容；描写→ d