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The traffic is busy during the rush hours. 高峰期交通繁忙….. traffic…. during the rush hours During the rush hours, there are so many cars and buses going on the road that… During the rush hours, there is a lot of traffic. so…. that… with结构 With so many cars and buses going on the road, … * 润色小建议 “高峰期”可意译: at peak time， a large current of cars and people “交通繁忙”可译为: traffic jam congestion 交通堵塞 be choke up with be crammed with 被…堵塞/塞满 * 加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤 send…to…, fetch…. , which … 非谓语结构…. Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. Many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, making the traffic heavier. * 加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤 What’s more, … pick up…. make…. To make things worse/ What’s worse, many parents coming to pick up their children make the street more crowded. In addition/ Additionally, many parents send their young children to school and fetch them home, which makes the traffic heavier. What’s more, parents often attend their kids to school, resulting in more serious traffic jams. What makes things worse is that children have to be picked up by their parents owing to their young age. * making the situation more serious. making the traffic heavier可意译为： so…. that….=too…to The children are so young that parents have to send them to school and fetch them home, which makes/making the traffic heavier. making 可替换为： causing, leading to, resulting in “send…fetch…” 可替换为短语： pick up 润色小建议 * 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险 thread one’s way，when doing It is dangerous for the students to thread their way among buses and cars when crossing the road. 固定句型It is +adj. for… to do…. * Students are risking their lives to thread their way among cars. 润色小建议 2. Some are exposed to danger when crossing the ocean/ sea of cars. 灵活运用其它的短语进行意译： 适当增加形容词和副词： it is extremely dangerous，it is of great/ tremendous danger * suggest/suggestion, take steps/ measures/ action to do… such as 政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。 M