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* * * * * * Beautify Composition 15分的作文中规中矩，该对的都对，包括内容要点的完整，语法与词形的正确，但是没有什么亮点。而20多分的作文句型词汇方面就做了很好的包装，它的句子如人穿的衣服，它已经不是普通校服，而是李宁、耐克等名牌，所以让人觉得很“拽”，而高考英语写作要的就是这种很“拽”的感觉. 小 结 15分（及格）和20多分(优秀)的作文到底差别在哪里？ 书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则 语言第一位（语言高级） 内容第二位（要点齐全） 结构第三位（文章分段） 一、高级词汇和语法 二、修辞手法 三、有效的连词 四、名人名言或谚语 语言第一位（语言高级） 龙头；猪肚；凤尾。 还要强化“高级、复杂”两个概念 1、词组优先原则 2、地道原则。 3、避免重复原则 　4、后、高、长原则— 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。 四项原则 　　 　 1、词组优先原则 ［原文］A new railway is being built in my hometown. ［修正］A new railway is under construction in my hometown. 　2、地道原则 ［原文］Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge. ［修正］Through traveling, I gained／obtained a lot of knowledge. 　4、后高长原则—后学到、较高级、较长词汇。 　　原 词 替换词 　　hard diligently 　　very rather extremely 　　pay attention to attach importance to 　　happy delighted enjoyable 　　more and more the increasing number of 3、避免重复原则 ［原文］I like reading while my brother likes watching television. ［修正］I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television. 一、肯定不如双否好 二、陈述不如倒装妙 三、主动不如被动巧 四、从句不如分词傲 要强化“语法、修辞”两个概念 修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。 一、肯定不如双否好 The postman comes on time every day. The postman never fails to come on time. He came here at 5 p.m.yesterday.(一般句式)  I couldn’t have made so much progress in English without his help. I have made great progress in English with his help. He did not come here until 5 p.m.yesterday. 倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。 1.Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we solve the problem of pollution. 2. So precious is time that we can’t afford to waste it. 3.Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam. 4. By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking. 二、陈述不如倒装妙 I w