浙江省2019高考英语 第三部分 写作导练案 第二讲 读后续写课件.pptVIP

◆思路点拨 本篇为记叙文。一位八十岁的老人和他的成年儿子坐在沙发上。同一个问题老人才问了三遍，儿子就已经十分恼怒和没耐心了；第四遍时，儿子已开始对他大吼了。伤心的父亲拿出一本发皱的日记让儿子读其中一页的内容：儿子小时候问了23遍同一个问题，父亲仍然耐心解释。 由全文大意以及文章最后的结尾部分可知这里是父子不同态度的对比，上文叙述了父亲让儿子看自己的日记，由续写第一段After reading the diary可知，后面的内容应是儿子看了日记后的感受，以及对一些问题的思考。 由续写第二段出现的关键词feeling ashamed可知，儿子对自己的行为感到愧疚，所以下文中儿子会对自己的行为道歉，然后向父亲保证以后好好对待父亲。 思路导航 ◆续写词汇 已给提示词汇： son，father，What is this？，It is a crow.，time，irritation，the same question，affection 可能用到的词汇： tear，reflect，think back，patiently，old age，burden，apology，forgive，promise，care for，treat well 【参考范文】 Paragraph 1： After reading the diary，the son was filled with tears and began to reflect on the days when he used to sit together with his father．His father would patiently answer the__same__question all 23 times without feeling irritation while his father asked him the same question just four times! The son thought to himself: If I attain old age，how will my son look at me? Will he think of me as a burden? Will he shout at me because of my poor sight，poor hearing or poor understanding? Paragraph 2： Feeling ashamed，the son got down on his knees before his father. He made an apology to his father，begging his father to forgive him for his bad behavior.He said this aloud，“I promise to see you happy forever，Dad.It is you who have cared for me ever since I was a little child，showering your selfless affection on me.You worked hard to make money so that I could afford to go to university.I will serve you in the best day.” ? 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 I was touched through experiences，memories，books，stories，animals，angels，and most of all other people.People have moved me and molded(对……影响重大) me with moments of love and examples of kindness. One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill worker，I found myself with very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys.I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them.I hated not having enough to give th