中考英语冲刺之写作(中考书面表达体裁及套路).docVIP

中考写作要求辅导讲义 主 题 中考书面表达体裁及套路 教学内容 C专题-中考写作要求 C专题-中考写作要求 写作要求 根据广州市《英语课程标准（2011年版）》规定：初中毕业时（五级），学生应能根据图示和表格写出简单的段落或操作说明，使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系、能简单描述人物或事件。 作文评价基本要求 Elements（要素） Level（档次） Content（内容）（6分） Relevance to topic（切合题意，体现要点） 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0.5 0 Development of topic（题材有所发挥） Accuracy（准确性）（6分） Grammar（语法） 6 5.5 5 4 3 2 1 0 Vocabulary（词汇） Mechanics（机械性，指大小写和拼写等格式错误） Fluency（流畅性）（3分） Organization（结构） 3 2.5 2 1.5 1 0.5 0 Cohesion（连贯性） 作文评价的要求与作文评卷的标准一致。英语的作文评卷一般都采用通读一遍，然后根据评分标准及文章的语言结构进行总体评分。中考英语书面表达题的具体要求是：切题，能正确表达思想；意义连贯，文章基本通顺；无重大语言错误。总的来说，考生要做到结构完整、意思连贯、表达清晰、语言正确，评分主要按照上图所示的内容、准确性、流畅性这三方面进行评分。 试题所提供的情景一般都会考虑到考生的年龄特点和能力范围。同学们只要根以上要求写出80词左右的短文，便可获得高分。 例如： Write at least 80 words about the topic “Things I Hate to Do”． （以“我不喜欢……”为题写一篇不少于80个词的短文。） Use the following points as a guide. （短文必须包含下列要点。） - What are the things that you hate to do? - What do you hate most? Why? (Give at least two reasons.) I love people and enjoy life. However, there are still things that I hate to do… 第一篇 I hate to drink wine and waste time. But I hate smoking most！ Smoking is not harmful to our health but also harmful to other peoples health. There are many people die of smoking every year. If we stop smoking, our health will become better and better. So we must do our best to stop smoking. Then our world will become more and beautiful. 点评： 该文章基本切题，除了第四句有语法错误以外，全文意义比较连贯，表达也比较清楚。但是，文章句式比较单一，用词不够丰富，缺少变化，理由只举了一个，没有展开。 第二篇 I hate to keep pets and tell lies. And the thing that I hate most is smoking. As we all know, smoking is unhealthy and can cause diseases. It is not only bad for smokers but also harmful to others. Whenever my father smokes,I feel sick and start coughing. Besides, smoking wastes a lot of money. Most people never plan to spend a lot of money on cigarettes, but once youre addicted to it,stopping is very difficult. So if you smoke, youre actually setting fire to piles of money. Just think of what you could buy with that money at the mall! Whats more, people who smok