2012050六8044157高考英语书面表达的高分攻略.pptVIP

Born in America，Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. （湖南卷） Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write and became a famous writer. （湖南卷） In response, the mom kneels down to show how happy and thankful she feels.（江苏卷） Badly injured as he was，he managed to take down the car’s number. （倒装）（全国卷） Only in this way（by using it often） can I improve my English. （倒装）（高级） Hardly had he come back when he knew the truth. （倒装）（高级） ②以不定式短语开头 He came to Beijing to visit his uncle. （一般） To visit his uncle, he came to Beijing. （高级） ③以同位语开头 一般句式： Shakespeare is a son and he is from a poor family. He had little education. He wrote many plays and poems. People all over the world like his plays and poems. （句式单一，啰嗦） 黄金句式：Shakespeare, a son from a poor family, a man of little education, wrote plays and poems that are read all over the world. (湖南卷 ) （以同位语开头,用一个较复杂句式，表达层次清晰，句式多变） 5）运用分词结构和独立主格使句子简洁，更有文采。好多考生在写作时不敢或不知如何使用这个最大的“亮点”，其实很简单，方法：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。如：Because I am an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.(辽宁卷) ，第一步，去掉连词Because; 第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语一致，去掉主语，改用分词，若前后主语不一致，保留主语，改成独立主格;第三步，改用分词， am变成分词being。 Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities.(辽宁卷) 又如：（浙江卷书表） After everything was done, they sat in the yard and chatted with the elderly people.（一般） Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people. （独立主格---高级） （江苏卷书表） Because she realize her mother must be tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.（一般） Realizing her mother must be tired after a day’s work, the girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder.（高级） He was praised by his teacher in public, the naughty boy determined to study hard.（一般） Praised by his teacher in public, the naughty boy determined to study hard.（高级） 6）巧用连接词及承接短语 ①利用连接词so…that, not only…but also, too…to 等。 一般句式： He (Edison ) was diligent【勤奋】. He worked day and