作文指导--建议和环保.pptxVIP

审题草稿检查誊写再检查*做题步骤（策略）审题认真审题，明确要求? 1．确定体裁和格式。（记叙文+议论）2．理清要点。（2点---经历和感受）3 ．确定人称和时态?。（第一人称、过去时、现在时） 草稿遣词造句，组段谋篇? 　*高级词汇、灵活多变的句型、丰富多样的句式、适度复杂的语法、正确的联接词和巧妙的过渡语。 *有些学生为了尽量避免错误，采用保守方法——往往倾向于采用最简单的句子、单调的句式和重复的词语，结果使文章平淡无奇,毫无文采?但请切记：量力而行！修改默读全文，检查修改?1）体裁、格式是否完全符合要求。? 2）主题是否切题，要点是否遗漏。? 3）语言是否规范、准确。? *行文是否连贯，表达是否符合英语表达习惯。? *单词拼写、大小写、标点符号是否正确。? 4）字数是否符合要求。? 誊写规范书写，一气呵成 * 段落层次明显；* 字迹工整、清楚、规范，易于辨认；* 大小写、标点符号正确；* 卷面干净，无大黑疙瘩、不用修改带等涂改。但切记：掌握好时间！第一档：（15-13分） 完全符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性。 第二档：（12-9分） 基本符合题目要求，观点正确,要点齐全。语法结构和词汇基本满足文章需要。语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，表达基本清楚。虽然有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。第三档：（8-5分） 部分内容符合题目要求，要点不齐全。语法结构和词汇错误较多，语言不通顺，表达不够清楚，影响整体理解。第四档：（4-0分） 与题目有关内容不多，只是简单拼凑提示词语，所写内容难以理解。要点+语言（词汇、语法结构、连贯性）中考书面表达评分标准连接词顺序：1）first, second, third, last（×：俗）2）firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（×：俗）3）the first, the second, the third, the last（×）4）in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（× ：so so）5）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（√）6） above all ，first of all, moreover, finally/in the end/at last （√）转折关系but, and yet, nevertheless, however 递进关系 what’s more, moreover, furthermore, besides, in addition, 因果关系 so, therefore, for this reason, as a result, in that case, so that, because, since, due to, because of, thanks to 总结on the whole, in short, all in all, in a word, in conclusion, in general, generally speaking, 对比关系： be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast, compared with (to), just like/ as, the former…the latter, on one hand…on the other hand让步关系： though, although, as, even if, even though, however, whoever, whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how (who, what, which, where, when)陈述事实： in fact, actually, as a matter of fact, to tell the truth, frankly speaking表达观点： so far as I’m concerned, personally, in my opinion, from my point of view, in other words, to put it another way举例说明： for instance/example, like, namely, such as，造句---非谓语动词He finished his homework and went out