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托福独立写作 主体段范例: 高级 Sample 21 论证: 大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展 Main Idea: A growing number of university graduates generate benefits to the country. ▪ 提升整体智力水平 ▪ 推进国民生产率 ▪ 提高生活水准 ▪ 国家更强大、更繁荣 ▪ enhance intelligence level ▪ boost national productivity ▪ have higher living standards ▪ become stronger and more prosperous Obviously, a growing number of university graduates generate various benefits to the country. In fact, this can directly increase people’s scope of knowledge and enhance the general intelligence level in the society. Since knowledge is power, it would undoubtedly boost a country’s national productivity as well as technological progress. On the individual level, citizens will have higher living standards and enjoy more leisure time. Thus, it is no exaggeration to say that a greater proportion of knowledgeable individuals mean that a nation will become stronger, more prosperous and even more politically stable. Sample 21 论证: 大学毕业生数量增加有利于国家发展 Main Idea: A growing number of university graduates generate benefits to the country. 论证方法 TS: 事实 SS1: 强调 SS2: 因果 SS3: 缩放 SS4: 小结 Sample 22 论证: 现代人永远不满足已经拥有的东西 Main Idea: People are always encouraged to chase one dream after another. ▪ 满足的人会被视为 没有雄心壮志 ▪ 科技的加速发展使得 人们追求更多的东西 ▪ people who feel gratified is likely to be regarded as having no aspirations ▪ the accelerating development of modern science and technology Moreover, living in the fast-paced modern society where success is synonymous with wealth and fame, people are always encouraged by to chase one dream after another. On the other hand, if a person feels gratified with what he has already had, he is most likely to be regarded as having no aspirations and unfairly labeled as being complacent. In the ultimate analysis, what compels people to have strong desires for more things is the accelerating development of modern science and technology, which turn out a great number of new products to b