人教版高三英语高考---基于问题解决的高三作文专题课课件 (共19张PPT).pptxVIP

Improve your writing 基于问题解决的高三作文专题课 四川省双流棠湖中学 汤芸 Learning objectives At the end of this class, you will be able to: 1. identify problems related to supporting details, cohesion coherence（衔接与连贯）, words and sentence variety in a passage; 2. know how to improve a passage by adding details, making it more cohesive and coherent and varying the language; 3. improve a passage with some problems. What are the problems？ Structure Content Language Three parts Topic sentences Key points Supporting details Correct, cohesive and coherent(衔接连贯), varied What can be done if your writing…？ does not have enough supporting details for each key point; is not cohesive or coherent (衔接连贯) does not have varied language (dull and repetitive重复的) Supporting details How to add supporting details？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to add supporting details. To make the sentences longer and more specific, we can: 1. use specific words 2. give examples 3. explain reasons 4. give facts as evidence … Summary (1) I hate the bad weather today. (2) My father is a warm-hearted man. (3) Square dancing is becoming more and more popular in China. Have a try! Cohesion and coherence（衔接与连贯） How to make your passage cohesive and coherent？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to make the passage more cohesive and coherent. To make the language more cohesive and coherent, we: 1. can use transitions（衔接词、短语） 2. must pay attention to the logical relationship··· 3. should make sure the topic is consistent … Summary Online courses have some advantages. They are convenient, because you can learn something that cannot be gained in classroom. They have disadvantages, too. Many things have disadvantages, so we should take them seriously. Have a try! Varied language How to vary the language？ Work in groups, compare the sentences and summarize the ways to vary the language in a passage. To avoid dull and repetitive language, we can use: 1. pronouns